What do you think of the start of my novel? Thanks. Genre: Romance and Mystery?

Honestly, I lost interest a few sentences in. Some of the way you phrase things is confusing and the writing sounds immature. "And one thing led to another" that makes it sound like they are teenagers, but they just got married sex is expected so it wouldn't make sense for it to accidentally happen as you phrase it. The metaphors were weird, I'm sorry they just didn't float my boat. Work on phrasing because it's not vague it's confusing and a turn off as a reader. Go to allpoetry.com you can post it there and get great feedback! I know all I've said is criticism but it's not terrible. I just pointed out the flaws because pointing out the good things would take too long. Good luck!